Review for You Could Miss It

You Could Miss It

(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-07-19 12:13:46 AM

Oh my.
I really love this. So much.
It's written in utter perfection, as well as the realistic-ness of your characters?

Brendon? Is so awfully sweet that I feel the sudden urge to give him a HUGE hug. He is adorable and I wish he were my boyfriend. ;]

Izabel? Is hopelessly in love and it was so terribly sad to read her heartbreak over Brendon's leaving. She, as well, deserves a HUGE hug.

I do enjoy the signficance of the movie Ferris Bueller's Day Off between the two. I mean, it's kind of a small thing, but you wrote it like it meant the world to her, which it probably did, and you portrayed that fact well. :]

The ending? Made me shout, "AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!" and it's 3 AM, so I hope I didn't wake anyone.

This was an AMAZING one-shot and I love it so much. :]

Author's response

Thank you darling.

I needed something to portray how close their bond was, and the movie was an excellent way to do that.
Also, when I am grieving or just not in a happy mood, I wear flannel PJs, eat Ben & Jerrys and watch a funny movie. I wanted that for Iz, and more importantly, I wanted Brendon to know that.


Thank you for your review, love!

-Elle

Log in!




Register Lost password

Filter

You won't see stories with a lower score when you browse or search. Log in to adjust filter.
0

 

Featured Story

Site Stats

  • Authors: 656583
  • Stories: 39951

Recent Stories