Review for You Could Miss It
You Could Miss It
(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-07-19 12:13:46 AM
Oh my.
I really love this. So much.
It's written in utter perfection, as well as the realistic-ness of your characters?
Brendon? Is so awfully sweet that I feel the sudden urge to give him a HUGE hug. He is adorable and I wish he were my boyfriend. ;]
Izabel? Is hopelessly in love and it was so terribly sad to read her heartbreak over Brendon's leaving. She, as well, deserves a HUGE hug.
I do enjoy the signficance of the movie Ferris Bueller's Day Off between the two. I mean, it's kind of a small thing, but you wrote it like it meant the world to her, which it probably did, and you portrayed that fact well. :]
The ending? Made me shout, "AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!" and it's 3 AM, so I hope I didn't wake anyone.
This was an AMAZING one-shot and I love it so much. :]
I really love this. So much.
It's written in utter perfection, as well as the realistic-ness of your characters?
Brendon? Is so awfully sweet that I feel the sudden urge to give him a HUGE hug. He is adorable and I wish he were my boyfriend. ;]
Izabel? Is hopelessly in love and it was so terribly sad to read her heartbreak over Brendon's leaving. She, as well, deserves a HUGE hug.
I do enjoy the signficance of the movie Ferris Bueller's Day Off between the two. I mean, it's kind of a small thing, but you wrote it like it meant the world to her, which it probably did, and you portrayed that fact well. :]
The ending? Made me shout, "AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!" and it's 3 AM, so I hope I didn't wake anyone.
This was an AMAZING one-shot and I love it so much. :]
Author's response
Thank you darling.
I needed something to portray how close their bond was, and the movie was an excellent way to do that.
Also, when I am grieving or just not in a happy mood, I wear flannel PJs, eat Ben & Jerrys and watch a funny movie. I wanted that for Iz, and more importantly, I wanted Brendon to know that.
Thank you for your review, love!
-Elle
I needed something to portray how close their bond was, and the movie was an excellent way to do that.
Also, when I am grieving or just not in a happy mood, I wear flannel PJs, eat Ben & Jerrys and watch a funny movie. I wanted that for Iz, and more importantly, I wanted Brendon to know that.
Thank you for your review, love!
-Elle
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