Review for You Remind Me Of A Former Love.
(#) infinite-oddity 2008-07-19 01:30:33 AM
As your beta, I know what is coming, so I am not completely surprised. But I read it all broken up in single IMs, so when it all flows together it astounds me. Never fails.
Ry? Poor kid. Wallowing in self-pity again. Back to square one again, I assume. The broken glass, the running. Everything you can do to describe him makes me feel like I actually know Ryan Ross. And at this point in time, I really want to slap him.
Elle? Damn, I love Elle. Okay, that sounds a bit egotistical. [for anyone beside Paige reading this, HELLO! My name is Elle. That Elle = Me] Anyway, I love her entire thing in this chapter. Her sarcasm with Nicole. AND THEN SHE IS SUCH A HO. So, yes, this was my favorite chapter.
Although, that might be a tad bit biased.
Helen? I loved her reaction. I love love love love loved it. Because you very rarely, or never, see that side of her. So it is really interesting.
Overall, a beautiful piece.
I loved it.
Ps: I saved your ass so many times I am pretty much SUPAHELLE. And my powers? INVISAELLE.
Ryan? I am torn between emotions for the pook kid. Anger? Sympahty? Sadness? WHAT? He did cheat, but his Brendon is never going to love him, causing me to feel a tad bit sad for him, considering he was hopelessly in love with the jerk.
Elle? No, it doesn't sound egotistical at all. I am in love with this character as well. She is UBER fun to write and I adore her sarcastic comments. :]
Helen? Gah, I wish to give her a huge hug. Stupid Ryan. -slaps him-
(Am I weird to feel for my fictional characters? Probably. Oh well. =/)
Yes, yes, yes, yes. You have saved me too many times to count. Stupid internet server, always freezing on me. You have no idea how grateful I am to have you. :]
Oh, and thank you for the review! :]
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