Review for You Remind Me Of A Former Love.

You Remind Me Of A Former Love.

(#) eileen162 2008-07-19 01:59:26 AM

nononononono. i thought ryan was getting less cynical!! Although this twist was very good and now i am begging for more.

poor poor ryan. but ever poorer helen. her heart must be shattered. will ryan ever get over brendon, will he ever stop loving him???

this is such a great story and your doing an amzing job. keep up the good work!

xxx Tess

Author's response

I'm glad you thought it was a nice twist. I was fearing people wouldn't like it. :]

Well, Ryan was getting less cynical, until he cheated on Helen and began thinking of himself as horrible once again.

I believe in the previous chapter, I portrayed something like, "Everyone gets screwed over in the end. Ryan is doing that to Helen, concluding that everyone is horrible, including himself."

Well, that's Ryan's thinking, anyway.

Annnnnnnd, you'll just have to wait and find out if Ryan will ever get over Brendon. ;]

Thank you for the review! :]

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