Review for She flew like an angel, Dropped like a Bullet...

She flew like an angel, Dropped like a Bullet...

(#) wheresyourheart 2008-07-19

this story is pretty good but its kind of annoying how you dont use punctuation marks and how its all in one paragraph, so it takes away from the story. not being mean, just giving you some constructive critisism, so dont take me as a bitch :)