Review for You Stole My Breath
(#) Life_is_42 2008-08-08 03:07:31 PM
Ah, dude, tacos are awesome!! And so is jon walker. You’re so lucky you got to speak to him.
You know what’s cool about the jwalk fans? They don’t just want in his pants. They genuinely think he’s the coolest thing since sliced bread, you know?
~Logan responded with immediate concern, hurrying to the sink before quickly doubling back ready to perform the Heimlich.~
hahaha. Emergency repsonders!! I had to laugh, because I would probably end up be ing killed by the Heimlich, rather than whatever was choking me.
So regarding Cassia and Logan, idk for some reason I really liked how he has a saving people complex. Because it shows that it truly is ingrainded in his character, and not JUST his profession. Plus it makes me wonder: once he ‘saved’ her (not that, I think, he could), wouldn’t he just get bored and move on to another DID (damsel in distress).
Ooo she’s having jwalks baby. xD I can’t WAIT to see what happens, especially if they go on tour…. I can’t wait to see her and jon run into each ot her again. =D.
Alas, a chapter without Jwalk, is like a day without sunshine (except I’m just kidding, because I happen to LOVE your chapters: you write SO well =) )
I'm glad you noticed Logan's need to be a "savior'. I wasn't sure if anyone was going to connect that to his profession. It may or may not come into play later in the story, even if Logan isn't that big of a character from here on out.
Sorry about the lack of jwalk in this chapter (as well as the next), but don't fret too much because starting after that there is surely going to be plenty more Jon Walker! Whether or not that means Cassia goes on tour, you'll have to wait and see.
Thank you so much for your great responses!! I hope you continue to enjoy the story. :D
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