Review for B.D.P.D.
I certainly think that this story shows promise. I believe that you could certainly have spent more time fleshing out the childhood build-up making it more easily swallowed as well as leaving out the reference to Remus. All in all, I enjoyed what I read and am looking forward to the next chapter.
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