Review for B.D.P.D.

B.D.P.D.

(#) Secca 2008-08-11 10:37:02 PM

I certainly think that this story shows promise. I believe that you could certainly have spent more time fleshing out the childhood build-up making it more easily swallowed as well as leaving out the reference to Remus. All in all, I enjoyed what I read and am looking forward to the next chapter.

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