Review for Ambiguous Lies & Heart String Ties
(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-08-13 06:00:50 PM
Macey greeted him as he stepped out, clean and spiffingly dressed
I love you forever for using the word 'spiffingly'. That's just too awesome.
Macey snapped her seatbelt into place as Jon started the car and glanced out the window
This made me yell, "SAFETY FIRST!"
Good job! You support car safety! Now all your fans will use their seat belts! GO YOU! :]
“Oh GOD,” Jon huffed, “Brendon, what are you doing here? Hot dates, by the way.” He motioned to Ryan and Spencer who were standing a little behind Brendon.
Hahahaha. This made me laugh. Ryan and Spencer ARE hot dates. xD
Brendon's lucky. Haha, jk.
“Yeah…well….” Brendon was having a hard time with a come back, “I…think his man flops are cool.”
DUDE! LMAO! I am OFFICIALLY using the term 'man flops' from now on. That was just awesome.
Okay, silly Jon. Getting drunk and kissing some ho. At least he told Macey about it. That's gotta mean something, right? I mean, honesty... Everyone likes that. :]
Alas, I have to see Macey's point as well. Having her boyfriend cheat, well, sort of, kind of, really sucks big time. Stupid Jon. If he wasn't so cool, I'd do some ultra crazy awesome kung fu move on him! :]
A cutting examination of the character of Dumbledore first posted in a small private forum I frequen...
In: Harry Potter
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My final words
A kiss on the cheek? Fleur knows better than to think that's enough, and she's not the only one.
In: Harry Potter
Things are not what they seem... In a world that keeps changing, how do you know who can you trust?
I set this when Brendon was in highschool. He meets new girl Trisha, but will she fall for the nerd ...
Author's note type thing. Posted in the MCR section because that's usually where I post.