Review for A New Life
I really like that Xander has "powers and knowledge, but I really hope that his new powers don't make him invincible and all knowing. What makes these story most interesting is the taking risks and over-coming obstacles. Please don't make Giles, Willow and Buffy be all bad -- characters need to have some dimensions -- even Xander (Angel, Cordy, Wesley, Gunn, Etc.) still needs to deal with faults -- being human means he can and will make mistakes. Being good just means that his motives are good.
These are a great group of characters to write about and you have a very interesting premise for a story.
Thanks for your writing - keep it up!
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