Man, I absolutly loved this chapter!
The whole Frerard concept is slowly unravelling as the story goes on. So much tension! But I like the way you are teasing us with it. ;)
Haha, it was cute when Gerard checked Frank out and when Frank had a spaz attack over the spider. I could so imagine him doing that (meaning Frank having a spaz attack over a spider. Though I could also see Gerard checking Frank out...) 'cos as you may know, he has a phobia of spiders in reality. I'm sure you knew that anyways.
OMFG I was pissing myself when Gerard attacked the mascot AKA Marcus. I just got wonderful visions of the 'I'm not okay' video. I love that shit. It was trés amusant. ;D
And I also loved how long it was. 12,000 effing words? That's about the length of some peoples stories.
Anyways, well done. I fuckin' loved it. You're a star. :)