Review for Thoughts of Pudding

Thoughts of Pudding

(#) dennisud 2008-10-26

The pacing is spot on and the gradual development of their relationship (H/L/Hr) is good. Seems you want Tonks involved as close to Harry w/o being a lover, good as I think they click well as siblings here.

Lets see how thig oes as they figure out what to do about Dumbles, Voldy and his malitious Minions!

dennisud