Review for Light's Hope, Death's Hunters

Light's Hope, Death's Hunters

(#) RLMSBPJPP 2008-11-05

Hey,
So Im really liking your story and think so far its been pretty great but do you think you could go back and add some dates to things?

The time line seems to jump around a little and even if it doesnt, its rather hard to follow.

Thats all I had, oh yeah as if it needs to be said Update! j/k. Keep up the good work!