Review for Things with Sharp Edges
Things with Sharp Edges
(#) San (hungry_worm) 2005-11-21 04:50:11 PM
sighs happily
""AND YOU - " she hissed, poking him in the middle of the chest with a surprisingly hard small finger - "ARE JUST AS BAD. He doesn't think at all, and you think way too much!" // Then she seemed to relent, reached up and settled his glasses back on his nose for him. "You. You're as blind with those things on as without them." "
What to say, what to say... I simply love it, the tone, the characterizations, everything. The way it feels during the read is incredibly nice, and I've read it more than once now. You've got a way with words and always manage to create such a capturing atmosphere. Well done!
""AND YOU - " she hissed, poking him in the middle of the chest with a surprisingly hard small finger - "ARE JUST AS BAD. He doesn't think at all, and you think way too much!" // Then she seemed to relent, reached up and settled his glasses back on his nose for him. "You. You're as blind with those things on as without them." "
What to say, what to say... I simply love it, the tone, the characterizations, everything. The way it feels during the read is incredibly nice, and I've read it more than once now. You've got a way with words and always manage to create such a capturing atmosphere. Well done!
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