Okay, so i went to your other site to read these when you posted them, and im so happy you posted them on here so i can tell you...
THIS STORY IS JUST AMAZING!!!
I love how Frank is like "i like him...i think" and is just confused! I love Gerard and the way he acts. He makes me laugh sometimes! I love it when hes scary. I think you do an awesome job writing them and describing them...Really amazing.
I love this story and cannot wait for more!!!!