yes, im sorry, this is going downhill.
sorry, again, but it's been going downhill since you killed Gerard.
um, bring Frank and Harper back in and it might pick up.
Author's response
Dont be sorry for telling me what you think, I thank you for that actually.
Anyone can review and be like awww i like this story update now, but it's harder to give critisism, so thanks.
I know myself this story is going downhill but I just dont want to discounitnue it an leave everyone hanging but I think I might have to, somebody could do a pardoy if they were that bothered lol.
But thanks again for your honesty
dondon xo.