Don't really know how to review story, but I can say that I like your Bya/Ren fic. However, I feel that maybe Renji has been a bit too soft/gentle, he gave me an impression of a very tough guy. Well, maybe people will change after being together with Byakuya too long. :D
I absolutely love this pairing and hope to read more fics about these two.
P.S. I like your 'Thankful' fic too.
Author\'s Response: Thank you very much for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed Thankful, that fic has had much less response than any of my others. Also, I've just posted the sequel to Dawning called Meridian, I hope you enjoy and thanks again.kimper :)