My boy just poked me to come by here and read this. We both really love comic books/graphic novels and I think you're capturing that vibe. And I don't think it's predictable! You got my last rating point =D
Thank you so much!! Bless you, both of you. You're so kind!
I know this type of story where you state the plot up front then allow the how and why etc to pan out isn't everyone's thing, but I do like to try different techniques.