Review for As Of Yet, Untitled.

As Of Yet, Untitled.

(#) shysmile 2009-01-19

This was unexpected, but I'm still happy to see the update! I missed this story so much.

This chapter was so sweet, and I always want to read more. However, it didn't have the usual humor. It was a serious chapter so I understand, but don't think you can get away with no jokes (or Frank) in the next update.

You asked for randomness, and I couldn't come up with anything interesting until you wrote, "she gripped the railing to keep from tumbling to the landing, just like she had not so very long ago." Guess what I did yesterday? Fell down the stairs! So here is the story: I was texting my friend and my cell phone's battery died so I was going downstairs to get the charger. On about the third step I slipped on my long pajama bottoms and tumbled head over heels all the way to the foot of the stairs. No one was home at the time either. My first thought I had as I was laying there was, "Damn, my phone is dead so if I've broken my hip or something I can't even call anyone." Weird right? Anyway, I'm totally fine except for some major bruises on my back and shins. Wow. I just wrote an entire novel for you.

Keep up the fantastic writing!

Author's response

Good! It's damn good you missed the story! When you miss something, it means you like it.

And there's Frank in the next chapter. No worries :D I know it was heavy, but it kinda had to be, you know? Plus, I had been in a funky mood lately, so, I guess it showed through my work.

Aw! My friend fell down the stairs the other day, whacked her foot. Now it looks disgusting. I hope your bruising isn't too terrible! And I'm glad you've got your priorities straight--when it comes to looking where you're going or texting, it's good to know which one you'll choose ;]