I think that this is a really good concept for a story...I do think that maybe you need to run it through a spell check, maybe? I'm really not trying to be rude, I just think that it would help the reader a lot. I think that this story is really interesting. I wonder if Gerard is gonna be like WTF? Why are you even talking to me, or if this will change his life and make it so that the band never happens...Well I'm really into this fic and I can't wait to see what happens next.