oh my valentines day was rather swell, thankyou! yours sounded good aswell! wheeeeee!
ohh hmm. i'd have to say i agree with gabe with the drinking thing. it's nice in a way, it shows he cares about her.
ohhhhhhh and btw with pete, i really liked the line where soap said she was walking with the two extremes.
but yeeeeeah, really good chapters! (: