That. Was. So. Damn. Captivating.
Ahhhh I have to know more! That was so good. And so original. I am going to rate you for originality, that's for sure. And you write exceptionally well. That's always a neccessity. Damn.
Please carry on? I don't always review fanfic unless I feel it really deserves to continue. So please, it would be great if you did. Thank you. :)