Review for Be Home Soon

Be Home Soon

(#) dreamcatchersfic 2006-08-27 10:44:54 AM

This was very moving. And there were no typos that I saw. ;) I wish I could give more constructive criticism but there was little to actually pick at. It was a nice 'character musing'.

Normally I'm not fond of simple reminiscing but with shorter fics it feels more palatable. And since this lead to a touching conclusion, it felt worthwhile. Nice work.

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