Goddamn internet deleted my review...oh well, here we go again:
I have to admit that I cringed throughout the Gringotts scene, mostly because Harry being the Heir of one or more of the Founders is horribly overdone, and there's little (if any) original material to work with there. Still, the rest was quite good, and I like your take on werewolves, even if it does make me wonder how lycanthropy was ever defined as a curse...biting adults, maybe? I also have to wonder how you'll handle Remus...
Looking forward to more.