Review for Battered Hearts
(#) HalfFrogPrince 2009-04-12 11:17:22 PM
Original - that's the best way to rate this one. You keep it fresh, and real. Maybe Harry can rally all the personalities that have been absorbed by the cog and beat it (or them) that way?
I guess we'll see an update next weekend?
I admit that in my outline the captured personalities figured prominently in the outcome, and still might. It depends on how far afield the actual story varies from the outline.
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