Hahaha! It's hilarious coz I'm an Aussie and didn't even realize there was all the bloody's in there, coz we say bloody all the time. All the time. Even in our adverts on telly, but then they say bugger in adverts aswell which I do not luke one bit!
Ok so I thought it was a great chapter. And lol at Steph "oh you could always ask a waitress to clean it up" oh she's a crack up! I loved it. And sad for Spence but yay also coz now he can go get Kate! Yay! Haha!
128 pages you say?!?! Wowzers! Thats good though coz it'll turn out to be a pretty solid read. Awesome. I'm excited! And thank you so much I will send you photos of the bound copy once I get a chance, which won't be for a few months as I'm fully working my little tail off right now. Oh and duh! It isn't finished yet! Of course I won't get it done til it's all finished. Ill even copy the reviews and your comments and put them in the back, if the reviewers don't mind of course.
PS if this is the second time this posted it's coz my net it gay =] Now I shall read the next chapter... Even though I'm supposed to be working... Shhh!
The kind words and praise of your story is all well deserved darl, you're fabulous!