Review for Hunting
Concrit: though the fight was pretty good, and I liked the bow/wire jutsu, the whole 'jumped by Sound ninja' was a bit random. What were the Sound nin doing there, not that far from Konoha? Why did they attack the girls, and thus betray their presence? Orochimaru and co work in the shadows. Why did they attack with first one man, then the others? The whole thing feels a bit fabricated to put the girls into the position they end up in. Small details could give that a bit more weight, perhaps.
After Slash carries a drunk Axl home, an intimate moment reveals his true feelings for the red-heade...
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I promise to delete this soon. This is just me introducing myself.
The boys decide to test their disguises at the zoo, not expecting to meet each other.
In the humor category because yes.
Loner Gerard Way makes a friend in art class.
Short drabble of Batman's thoughts at the end of Arkham City. First Person POV.