Okay This story is AMAZINGLY cool and everything, and i am being completely nice as always, but i hope your up for a bit of constructive criticism if you catch my drift. . .
Okay ill give it to you strait.
I DONT LIKE JAMIA. She kissed Frank!! Not cool.
If you ask me you should definitely do some more Frerard, cos i mean they had the kiss and Frank admited he kinda liked it and all, and then all Frereardness just . . stopped. So pwease pwease pwease add some Frerardness im begging you!!!
puppy eyes
Also, i think there SHOULD be a bit more drama. some mix ups, make it confusing, and i reckon Mikey mite fall for Jamia hint hint ^^
Lol just my dumb advice, you dont have to listen to it. . . great story though really, keep it up ^^
XO Nannonz