Review for The New Face of Harry

The New Face of Harry

(#) juggler196 2009-05-15 11:58:25 PM

It's a good start. You've explained/shown harry's thought process as to how and why he's going to change, so let's see it. I'd recomend that the next chapter or two have some good interesting scenes to help hook the less patient readers. Overall a good story and i'll certainly look forward to and read the next chapters.

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