Very good chapter and so far a great story. I was a little dissapointed that, for the most part, his invovement and where and who he went with was so vague, but in the end, the bad guys snuffed it, so that was good. I am really looking forward to reading the reaction of all those left behind in England and where Sirius and Remus are and what they are doing.
You really are great with plot ideas and I always look forward to anything you write.
I really do hope you end this with a good overview of thier futures, what happened with Dumbles, and the fate of all those left behind. I
d hate to wonder for example whatever became of.... Know what i mean? Now that you changed the canon story, what happened next?