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(#) Ithilwen 2005-12-11 12:48:13 PM
An insightful little character sketch, but for much of it, this could be any experienced, slightly cheuvanistic guy.
Interesting thing about "calling:" I don't remember seeing phones in FFVII.
Author\'s Response: Thanks for pointing that out. Zack's attitude was meant to set up his persona as an average guy on the prowl to (hopefully) contrast with the potential for something more beneath the posturing. While technically no actual phones were mentioned or used in FFVII, there was the internet and a fair amount of comparable and more advanced technology. There are hi-tech phones aplenty in AC and I doubt two years would be enough for them to pop out of the blue.
Interesting thing about "calling:" I don't remember seeing phones in FFVII.
Author\'s Response: Thanks for pointing that out. Zack's attitude was meant to set up his persona as an average guy on the prowl to (hopefully) contrast with the potential for something more beneath the posturing. While technically no actual phones were mentioned or used in FFVII, there was the internet and a fair amount of comparable and more advanced technology. There are hi-tech phones aplenty in AC and I doubt two years would be enough for them to pop out of the blue.
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