Review for Ghost In The Mirror
(#) IeroMyHero 2009-06-12 05:25:54 PM
Anyway. Your story. It was...really short, and people above me are saying it was sad, but I personally thought it was way to short to be ANYTHING. Granted, you have a good writing style...but you need to write more than that, I think in order to give off a legitimate message or cause anyone to feel anything deep. Keep writing.
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