Review for Ghost In The Mirror

Ghost In The Mirror

(#) IeroMyHero 2009-06-12 05:25:54 PM

HEY HEY HEY! THAT'S MY NAME! IDENTITY THEFT! IMA CALL THE COPS ON YOU MOFO! WTF ASKLDJALSKDJLAKSJDKLA MY NAME! MINE!!!!!!! Okay, I'm done freaking out about that.

Anyway. Your story. It was...really short, and people above me are saying it was sad, but I personally thought it was way to short to be ANYTHING. Granted, you have a good writing style...but you need to write more than that, I think in order to give off a legitimate message or cause anyone to feel anything deep. Keep writing.

Author's response

Dx I sorry! I blanked on a name lol. And I know it was über short but you give good advice! :D and thank youhz

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