Review for Ghost In The Mirror

Ghost In The Mirror

(#) IeroMyHero 2009-06-12 05:37:39 PM

I'm a nitpick. So I'd also like to point out this line:

It's almost masochistic, the way I like to receive my own pain; I'm like a sadist, but only to myself.

A sadist to yourself IS a masochist...in which case, it wouldn't be ALMOST masochistic, it would be masochistic. I advise you to write something else there.


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Thankee for the help :D yeah i'm new to this shizzle xP so I'm gonna fcuk up a lot

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