Review for Only The Strong Survive (Forbidden Pt 2)
Only The Strong Survive (Forbidden Pt 2)
(#) marcialj83 2009-07-07 01:22:38 PM
OKAY FIRST OFF NO WORRIES IN NOT POSTING.
SECOND, HAPPY BIRTHDAY. I HOPE THAT IT WAS FUN AND THAT YOU GOT ALL THAT YOU WANTED.
THIRD THIS STORY FUCKING ROCKS AND I MEAN ROCKS. I LOVED THE ENDING:
‘That’s what I said’ she huffed ‘it’s your turn to get the prize’
‘You’re right Mini’ he said with a smile catching Cheyenne’s eyes as he walked though the kitchen to the garden. ‘It is my turn.
IT IS FRANKS AND CHEY'S TURN TO BE TOGETHER. I JUST KNOW IT.
LAST, RANDOM, BUT I LOVE CAP LOCKS.
SECOND, HAPPY BIRTHDAY. I HOPE THAT IT WAS FUN AND THAT YOU GOT ALL THAT YOU WANTED.
THIRD THIS STORY FUCKING ROCKS AND I MEAN ROCKS. I LOVED THE ENDING:
‘That’s what I said’ she huffed ‘it’s your turn to get the prize’
‘You’re right Mini’ he said with a smile catching Cheyenne’s eyes as he walked though the kitchen to the garden. ‘It is my turn.
IT IS FRANKS AND CHEY'S TURN TO BE TOGETHER. I JUST KNOW IT.
LAST, RANDOM, BUT I LOVE CAP LOCKS.
Author's response
Hello lovely. Thank you for the bday wishes I had an awesome day.
I love the ending too, that was writen in litterally second before I posted I thought the ending needed a little more uumph! So I'm glad you liked it.
I'M HAPPY YOU WRITE IN CAPIITALS MAKES YOUR REVIEW LOOK LIKE YOUR SUPER EXCITED!! lol x
I love the ending too, that was writen in litterally second before I posted I thought the ending needed a little more uumph! So I'm glad you liked it.
I'M HAPPY YOU WRITE IN CAPIITALS MAKES YOUR REVIEW LOOK LIKE YOUR SUPER EXCITED!! lol x
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