Review for Only The Strong Survive (Forbidden Pt 2)

Only The Strong Survive (Forbidden Pt 2)

(#) marcialj83 2009-07-07 01:22:38 PM

OKAY FIRST OFF NO WORRIES IN NOT POSTING.

SECOND, HAPPY BIRTHDAY. I HOPE THAT IT WAS FUN AND THAT YOU GOT ALL THAT YOU WANTED.

THIRD THIS STORY FUCKING ROCKS AND I MEAN ROCKS. I LOVED THE ENDING:

‘That’s what I said’ she huffed ‘it’s your turn to get the prize’
‘You’re right Mini’ he said with a smile catching Cheyenne’s eyes as he walked though the kitchen to the garden. ‘It is my turn.

IT IS FRANKS AND CHEY'S TURN TO BE TOGETHER. I JUST KNOW IT.

LAST, RANDOM, BUT I LOVE CAP LOCKS.

Author's response

Hello lovely. Thank you for the bday wishes I had an awesome day.

I love the ending too, that was writen in litterally second before I posted I thought the ending needed a little more uumph! So I'm glad you liked it.

I'M HAPPY YOU WRITE IN CAPIITALS MAKES YOUR REVIEW LOOK LIKE YOUR SUPER EXCITED!! lol x

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