About the Salazar/Harry contrast. I know you're probably groaning to yourself now, but I want you to know that I'm not complaining. While reading the conversation with Tonks, I really felt that Salazar was dominating the conversation. I later realized that Tonks never once spoke of Salazar's accomplishments, only Harry's. So, while I'm not completely happy with how it initially seemed, I'm with you overall.
I'm not sure if that even made sense, but I can't think of how to word it better.
At any rate, I loved the Harry/Tonks scene. The argument was fantastic, as was the resolution. Hopefully the next couple of chapters will include some more of Bellatrix and Narcissa.
It was a nice touch to include the memories of the Fudge scenes. They were necessary, and I think actually typing them out (or copying and pasting them) just makes Madam Bones' reactions make more sense.
At any rate, I'm looking forward to your next update.