Review for These Tears I Cry
These Tears I Cry
(#) ShadingInGrey 2005-05-16 12:02:14 PM
Unfortunately, I'm not very good at writing poetry, so I don't know how useful my review will be. However, I thought this was really good - there was a strong connection with me. I thought 'salty waterfalls' was particularly strong.
The only improvement I could possibly suggest - and I'm only pointing this out because I know you're supposed to suggest some improvement - is perhaps to avoid clichés.
However, this is a very strong, intense piece of poetry which I thoroughly like. Thank you for sharing!
Tania
The only improvement I could possibly suggest - and I'm only pointing this out because I know you're supposed to suggest some improvement - is perhaps to avoid clichés.
However, this is a very strong, intense piece of poetry which I thoroughly like. Thank you for sharing!
Tania
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thank you for reading and reviewing!
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