Okay - I'll do the review thing first.
I'm enjoying this and I'd really like to see where it goes. I imagine that Pete is thinking 'Damn! He's got a girlfriend!" Lol! And the confusion starts!! :D
Second thing. It's a personal preference, so by all means ignore me, but I really hate it when people state how many reviews they want before they carry on. You should be writing for your own pleasure and enjoy it if others like it too.
Granted, I'd love it if people read AND reviewed, but they don't, not all. But I really appreciate the ones that do, because they do it because they take precious time out of their day to say they like something and that's special. I'll ask people to review (if they have time), but I won't specify numbers - mostly because I'm too keen to keep writing.
Do it because you love it, people will review anyway.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Sas x
Author's response
Thanks for telling me that. I'm glad you liked it. And I only tell people that I need a certain amount of reviews because I need to know that people are reading the story and actually LIKING it. I'd hate to just babble on and on and on to no one. Also, I kinda need time to think of what I'm gonna write each time first. Each chapter is different because they are in different POVs, so I need to create a character that seems real and not your run-of-the-mill preppy, emo, goth, or gay person. They need to seem like an actual person. You get what I'm trying to say? If not, sorry I bothered you.