Review for Getting My Baby Back
(#) areyounormal 2009-09-07 08:03:03 PM
Brilliant!! I was there! I saw it, heard it and boy did I feel it!!
Joanna's a clever woman!! I can just see Mrs Howell sitting back down wondering how on earth she got her to say all that, but it was so natural.
So Alyssa taking the stand. I imagine she'll be nervous, but hopefully she'll surprise them. But lawyers can be tricky. I have all my fingers crossed!!
Rays comment about country singers was hysterical!! :D
This was SO worth the wait, but already I'm impatient for the next chapter!!
I'm glad you liked it and felt like you were there.
Joanna has a few tricks up her sleeve we'll just have to wait and see. I've already written a few hundred words for the next chapter, just trying to find the time. My mind is full of things I thought would make it more dramatic but in the end they aren't conducive to the story so after all that thought going with my original thoughts on it. Who knows maybe my fingers will have different ideas.
Alyssa has a lot to be nervous about her past maybe catching up with her. Daryl Thomas is one of those tricky lawyers but we'll see how she'll hold up.
Ray's comments was one of those things that I let my fingers do the typing on LOL!!
Thanks for the compliment and the review!!
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