Review for Harry Potter and the Psychopath’s Phone

Harry Potter and the Psychopath’s Phone

(#) cloneserpents 2009-09-15 10:32:57 AM

In my opinion, you went overboard with the wild and crazy antics and dove headfirst into annoying. Zany does not necessarily equal funny.

Every line does not have to feature someone saying or doing something silly or crazy. Try toning it down a bit.

Shawn (a.k.a. cloneserpents)

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