I enjoyed your story. The reactions of the participants might have some possibilities. I was thinking of the ending to Young Frankenstein and thought there might be some similar possibilities. Aside from that who doesn't like a good revenge story? Thanks for writing. W.
Author's response
Thank you Wolfric, I'm glad you enjoyed this.
I must admit, I haven't seen 'Young Frankenstein' since it was released, (Showing my age here!) and while I admit there might have been some influence, I cannot recall what it was.
Yupper! Revenge is always, good...especially if the 'vengee, provides the method of his/her downfall.
Alorkin