(#) Sassy 2009-09-23
The three testimonies don't add up, surely someone can see that?? That Lawrence guy is so evil, I can't wait to see him get what's coming to him!
Poor Alyssa! I hope that last line didn't mean she was going looking for drugs :( That would be the end of everything!
This was really gripping and I feel so tense now!! Brilliant! :D
Looking forward to more!
Sas x
Author's response
Hi there Sas,
You're right they won't add up and I'm sure the judge will see that, but will it be in time. Lawrence is certainly a slick one. I believe the chapter after the next things will start to come to a head only three or four more chapters. Yikes I can see the end!!
Yes, poor Alyssa you'll find out at the end of the next chapter what happens with Alyssa. Belive it or not it's written just gotta beta it and it's going up. We'll find out exactly what happened the day Patrick was killed as told by an eye witness (which I did reveal in an earlier chapter).
Yes everything is starting to come to a head lots of things are going to come to a head in the next two or three chapters as things start to resolve themselves.
I hope you like it and as always thanks for the review!!
LOL I just reread my response and it's very repetitive. I shouldn't be doing this at 6:30am.