Review for Appetite For Destruction
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-11-22 12:47:55 AM
What I got from it was this:
He told Ray about the party. They fought about something that ultimately led up to the "Why don't you just go back" thing. Yeah?
This wasn't supposed to happen at all. I was arguing with my own mother and this sorta came out. The story will go back to normal in the next chapter, there may be more of this little diary thing to let people see into his head abit more. I was also gunna write just a normal chapter but I physically couldn't because of my mother.
MAYBEEEEE (well I hope) some things will be easier to understand in the next chapter.
What could have happened if Harry ate Romilda's chocolate cauldrons that night? And what will Hermio...
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Important message in chapter four. Please read it.
Yes, yes, auditions. Note added.
More auditions. Haven't done this in a while. Notes added.
Could you walk away from everything you know? Start again with a dangerous stranger? Could I do it? ...
"So you're like, my bitch now?" :FRERARD: