Review for Bloody Terrorists

Bloody Terrorists

(#) Dragonstone-pheonix 2009-12-02 07:38:55 PM

hey you should really ellaborate on your story a bit more :) perhaps make a plot or something with the next chapter if you make one hopefully you will

I thought it was alright but couldn't really understand what you were trying to achieve but i must admit i did laugh!
Oh btw I'm Australian and I would never cancel bbq day that i have planned ^_-


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