Review for The Darkness Is The Safest Place To Hide

The Darkness Is The Safest Place To Hide

(#) revenge 2009-12-06 01:09:01 PM

Very good, really! Job well done. But it's a tad short. I think if you elongated the plot line, it'd be even better. But very original and creative. Kudos! :)

Author's response

I apologize for the story being so short. Being able to write more in a single story is something I definately want to acheive in the future. And thank you so much for the advice as to elongate the plot line. It will be very helpful for the next time I write.

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