nawww i really liked it. i thought your writing/grammar/punctuation was really clear/correct. please continue with it. i really enjoyed it and would love to rate/review more :)
Author's response
yeah i really dont like it when people write stories and you like cant read it because there grammar and punctuation sucks golden monkey balls.
i will continue this story, thank you for reviewing and rating and whatnot. i'm glad you enjoyed it :)
thanks for reviewing!
~mo~