Review for So Shut Your Eyes
So Shut Your Eyes
(#) lunchboxhero 2010-02-06 12:45:12 AM
It took me long enough but I finally realized why this character of willow seems so familiar. She's a more annoying version of Sookie of True Blood. It's probably just a coincidence, but still, that's what I picture.
The story is good at first but gets stale after awhile. Whiney bitch who has issues and gets clingy and a sad rockstar who needs to be fixed. Haven't we all read some form or another of that? (although the supernatural twist is okay.) Each chapter seems to be them arguing about whether they love eachother or if they're lying blah blah.
You're a great writer, not taking away from your talent, but especially near the end, the story just bores and becomes redundant with all the arguing.
The story is good at first but gets stale after awhile. Whiney bitch who has issues and gets clingy and a sad rockstar who needs to be fixed. Haven't we all read some form or another of that? (although the supernatural twist is okay.) Each chapter seems to be them arguing about whether they love eachother or if they're lying blah blah.
You're a great writer, not taking away from your talent, but especially near the end, the story just bores and becomes redundant with all the arguing.
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