Review for They Have Always Been Wrong

They Have Always Been Wrong

(#) themission 2010-02-06 02:22:58 PM

i loved how you ended each section with 'he desperately desired to be'. it really helped connect each part and bring it together :) and it was all so true and deep. when i read the part about what people sacrifice to be a musician i was like, 'that's exactly it, that's how i feel,' you captured it perfectly =]

Author's response

I'm so relieved that I did the musician part some justice. That was the one part that I feared I wouldn't display correctly. And hearing that I captured it right from a musician yourself makes me so happy. So thank you so much :D

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