Review for Portals, Steam and Magic
Portals, Steam and Magic
(#) dougal74 2010-02-14 11:06:55 AM
An interesting concept and I look forward to seeing the story develop. But, for a rewrite your spelling and grammar are rather poor.
For example:
'cased' should be 'cast'
'trail' should be 'trial'
Those are two of many errors throughout the chapter.
For example:
'cased' should be 'cast'
'trail' should be 'trial'
Those are two of many errors throughout the chapter.
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