Review for Portals, Steam and Magic

Portals, Steam and Magic

(#) dougal74 2010-02-14 11:06:55 AM

An interesting concept and I look forward to seeing the story develop. But, for a rewrite your spelling and grammar are rather poor.

For example:

'cased' should be 'cast'
'trail' should be 'trial'

Those are two of many errors throughout the chapter.

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