i love the story so far! the only thing i dont like is bert. erk he is disgusting!!!! (im guessing that you like him so im really sorry DX!!!) BERT, THOSE LIPS ARE FOR FRANKIE!!!!
i'm so glad people still read these :') thank you! i haven't written in ages. i'm a little rusty.
don't worry, bert is meant to be hated in this :D i agree though, he is a bit too greasy for my liking now. he used to be better