Review for The Art Of Love
(#) EvieSaunders 2010-04-12 01:50:05 PM
The thing I love most is that you didn't rush into anything. It all happened in time and I also love the way you explain things :)
I just wish you would describe more, y'know? like what she looks like and where she is. Thats the only bad thing and its not even that bad!!
And yes, yes!! The weather has been splendid. I spent my weekend in Wales and it was beautiful weather :D
You story is great. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise.
And thanks :) I still don't think I am though... :/
I'll try describing more! It seems I'm not very good at that in my English work either.
The weather has been nice, although in Colchester today a black cloud looms, which isn't very good :/
Thanks for the review,
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