Welcome back! Always glad to see another story by you.
If I understand it, the 2 Harry's (Harries?) have merged, so it's the combined one that is talking to Hermione?
The comment about Dumbles makes me wonder how good he's going to be in this story. Manipulative or borderline evil Dumbledore is fairly common these days; unfortunately, that's because of canon. So I'm interested in your take on him.
Looking forward to more.
Tom A.