Review for YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR

YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR

(#) Wolfric 2010-04-23 05:37:15 PM

This seems like a good start. I like Harry to be more aware and assertive. Even just a little shift in that direction could make things work out better in the end. This story seems like a substantial shift and that looks like fun as well. I bet Snape will "appreciate" the change. Thanks for writing. W.

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